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I thought I had hope
But it was red as your hands
And the hints you dropped
Collected and shaped
Into something so lovely
But only to turn out fake

But who was I kidding
This cruel hole in my back
Matches your knife
Made from your words
You said to me last night

So with out question
I failed once again
Convinced there was something
But nothing to be found
Just some over used phrases
Only to be repeated again

You will love me always
Which is never in the end
Its not a win loose situation
Its just some more lies
That cover up this dried up dream
©2005-2009 ~allenwithane
:iconallenwithane:

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well this is the same sort of topic as the other, and well, i dont care. I needed to write it and here it is.
its about a guy, and a girl, and their relationship. do you really need any more info?

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:iconlabeledmur:
nice i like it

This cruel hole in my back
Matches your knife
Made from your words
You said to me last night
^^^I love this~!~~

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:flagcanada: *Mur* :+favlove:
:iconpenguin-loves-ramen:
this is a great poem. One of your best. I Love this part

"This cruel hole in my back
Matches your knife
Made from your words"

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cheers,

:penguin: Penguin Loves Ramen :penguin:

"so you made me come, then you sent me away like a messanger bird. So I circled the earth blown away in the wind, but I always returned" -Bright Eyes

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:iconallenwithane:
Thanks,

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With Love,
-Al
:iconallenwithane:
thanks a ton!

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With Love,
-Al
:iconamorance:
wonderfully written.

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Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
:iconallenwithane:
thank you.

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With Love,
-Al

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